Y// Inside Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// Inside

Rating: 5.0


Yesterday I went inside,
inside my heart
I replaced all blood
with a torrent of love.

Love is what is pumped now
through my arteries
to my brain, to my words
to my hands, to my deeds

to my lungs, and vocal cords
My skin cannot contain
It's flowing, gushing
gushing in and out

Inside my heart,
a torrent of love...

Friday, March 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: blood,heart,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Replaced my 'blood' pressure, which cannot be too high or too low,
with 'love' pressure, the higher the better..... :)

A sky-high love pressure may be the best cure for blood pressure problems.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreekala Sukumaran 01 April 2016

Wow! ! I wonder if it can happen.. Your words truly flow form your heart, from each and every word you write.. Well done.. You have moved me through the poem.. Thanks a lot for sharing it Hans.. :)

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Sreekala Sukumaran 01 April 2016

Wow! ! I wonder if it can happen.. Your words truly flow form your heart, each and every word you write.. Well done.. You have moved me through the poem.. Thanks a lot for sharing it Hans.. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2016

With a torrent of love! ! Nice work.

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Hans Vr 25 March 2016

Many thanks Edward.

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