Y... Mirror Marvel Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y... Mirror Marvel

Rating: 5.0


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A long stretch of wet sand
Exquisite watercolour
Bottomless pond of delicate blue sky
Deep inside, wool of clouds floating
below the tops of fine casuarinas
A wave is flooding the lovely canvas
Ripples move slowly away
to create another mirror marvel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Igor Balatsky 23 January 2012

A kind of Zen contemplation… Life is a Marvel, that is worked by the Lord every instant, which is always different. Thank you so much for your Vision.

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Unwritten Soul 27 November 2011

When the nature smiles, people absorb the panorama and inspired to share the persona..The brush always the tip of your fingers, the colors you take from keyboard and the images come without apparent images, not fixed in shapes but flexible according different imagination...that's the beauty when poet painting...by the words_Unwritten Soul

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Spiritual Seeker 23 November 2011

Beautiful presentation of nature and the spiritual message...lovely lovely poem! The breeze of the south china sea are certainly having its effect on you! ! 10+++

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Walterrean Salley 11 November 2011

Very clever. Brilliant actually. Mother nature has her own canvas and paint. And she does an amazing job at creating such masterpiece, which you, through poetic insight, have beautifully captured and has shared with each of us. Thank you much. Definitely a 10++.

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Jacqui Broad 09 November 2011

Everything may look calm on the surface, but as soon as ripples appear, everything looks different. Such is life...in stormy weather we get tested... Marvelous poem.

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