Friday, July 31, 2015

Y// The Beauty Of Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat in a blue bus, on its side a white line
We rode through a landscape wonderfully fine
and a man sitting in the seat in front of me
was reading the paper absorbing all negativity
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Aufie Zophy
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David Wood 17 August 2015

Lovely poem Hans, how we all go through life with our eyes shut to the beauty of nature.

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Unwritten Soul 13 August 2015

This is a sad side of life panorama and you let it be so good here as everyones reminder_Soul

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Smoky Hoss 03 August 2015

Oh wow! This is superb! So good, so real, so true. Excellent.

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Hans Vr 17 August 2015

Thanks

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Lyn Paul 31 July 2015

Superb. Love the meaning in your words.

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Hans Vr 31 July 2015

Thanks, Lyn

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