So, what is envy?
Is it the child of hatred,
or simply nothing?
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I like this one Herbie darling what about the other 547 PIECES.
Yes, Herbert. This is most definately it. Well done. You got there in the end.
Excellent Herbert! I have no idea what you're talking about but it sounds brilliant! (Just joking, honest) . Seriously though, apart from the typo (please amend imediately) , This would be a perfect haiku if it had 17 syllables instead of 18 and if it was 1st line 5 syllables,2nd line 7 syllables and 3rd line 5 syllables. Then it would be perfect. Yours always Gypsy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I admire you in confessional mode, Herbert. It suits all of us.