You! Poem by Paul Butters

You!

Rating: 5.0


Your shining eyes excite:
Those pupils, fathomless black,
That grab, and drag me down
Into bottomless pits;
Like magnets drawing me into deep radiance.

Your swirling, tumbling hair that makes me dream
Of cascading feathers wisping all over my face,
As leaning over you draw closer,
To kiss me with your moist, shimmering lips.

Those lips that pout their promise,
To cushion mine in hot embrace,
And pull me down a never-ending tunnel:
So deep to Ecstasy’s black space.

Your body is a flowing land,
A symmetry of mounts and vales:
Seductive wiggling curves,
With endless
Tapering
Legs.

Yet beauty’s bettered by your warmth,
For looks are just skin-deep,
It is your heart that I adore,
Your Love I wish to keep.

We should be soul-mates, you and I,
Of this I’m very sure.
With Hope, and Luck,
And not a little pluck,
Our Love can long endure.

If This doesn’t Pull her Nothing Will!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Butters 19 August 2015

Thanks Everyone. A fun write!

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Tia Maria 06 July 2008

beautifully written - sounds like she loves you already - perhaps she just can't express in words :)

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Patricia Gale 10 May 2007

Lovely, she should fall right into the romantic verse.....

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Lynda Robson 16 January 2007

Wow! how sweet, how could she fail to resist you after writing such lovely words, best wishes Lynda xx

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Francesca Johnson 15 January 2007

A charming poem, Paul. Hope it does the trick! Love, Fran xx

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Paul Butters

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