You Are A Queen On The Mars Comments

what a poem? . melt me. when we feel we write poem. But when we make others to feel, we are poets.

beautiful poem sir, great imagination..

So original and creative with great lines, I loved this poem. Inspired write! !

Asif, a wonderfully novel and brave idea. Envy your ability to write lke this in a language that is probably your second or third. Most of us find it difficult enough in our first and only.

'tis an amazin' piece of poetry! Excellent Imagination! ! ! ! !

The flight of ur imagery is marvellous. It is rightly said that a poet can reach even the locations/areas wheere even the sub rays can not reach.

once again you made it....you wonderfuly explained that the distance not a matter if our love is so deep....true love never dies....: -) »so close«

I'm trying to imagine how crazy a love could be under the influence of two moons! Nice work :)