Wednesday, November 20, 2013

You Are Invincible Comments

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You are not the invisible air,
To keep you in the compounded jar,
Cap you with the cultural tether,
Blow you to raise the personal pressure,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 November 2013

done well. metaphorical. nice to read.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2013

Deep metaphor! I enjoyd interpreting dis in my own way! Such a grand poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 November 2013

For the one who is intangible. Nicely put. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 November 2013

I think you talk about the Lord or the might of human Cap you with the cultural tether, its lovely one

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