You are my drunkenness...
I did not sober up, as if I can do that;
I don't want to anyway.
I have a headache, my knees are full of scars
I am in mud all around
I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.
hesitant light- the darkness! march since the genesis as the sage towards the light!
You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; I don't want to anyway. passion and infatuation. tony
You are my drunkenness... Looks like a tug-of-war between the passion and emotion. Well crafted poem. Congrats on your being at top.
Bearing pain in heart you are looking for peace and happiness. 'I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.'.. is very aptly said. Congrats.
light is light full inside but hesitancy makes it maze of life
I have a headache, my knees are full of scars I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light. You are my drunkenness. tony
Hesitant light is thought provoking.... An excellent modern poem of the day!
I found this poem chosen modern poem second time as the poem of the day. Congratulations.
You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; romance and desire and passion. tony