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You Are My Drunkenness

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You are my drunkenness...
I did not sober up, as if I can do that;
I don't want to anyway.
I have a headache, my knees are full of scars
I am in mud all around
I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.
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Anil Kumar Panda 18 April 2020
Bearing pain in heart you are looking for peace and happiness. 'I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.'.. is very aptly said. Congrats.
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Mahtab Bangalee 18 April 2020
light is light full inside but hesitancy makes it maze of life
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 April 2020
I have a headache, my knees are full of scars I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light. You are my drunkenness. tony
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Pallab Chaudhury 18 April 2020
Hesitant light is thought provoking.... An excellent modern poem of the day!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2020
I found this poem chosen modern poem second time as the poem of the day. Congratulations.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2019
This is a great philosophical poem having a nice theme behind it..
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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 18 April 2019
You are my drunkenness... Looks like a tug-of-war between the passion and emotion. Well crafted poem. Congrats on your being at top.
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2019
Full of scars! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Khairul Ahsan 18 April 2019
'I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light' - The poem ends so beautifully!
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 April 2019
You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; I don't want to anyway. passion and infatuation. tony
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