You Are My Love 2 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

You Are My Love 2

Rating: 5.0


You are
The living poems
Of my tears,
The living letters
Of my blood.

You are
The blue alphabets
Of the paper boat,
That floats on
The fluids of passion,
The wave of fusion
Or our carnal desire,
On the ocean of time,
Under the yellow sky
Of our separation.

Tuesday, May 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,love and life,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Sahoo 05 June 2016

You are The blue alphabets Of the paper boat, That floats on The fluids of passion, The wave of fusion Or our carnal desire, On the ocean of time, Under the yellow sky Of our separation. Beautifully written. Thanks.

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Prativa Rani 08 November 2017

Thanks Sanjukta Ma'am for the great remarks. I agree, this is a beautiful poem shared.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 May 2018

Marvelous words like these never come to poets like me...passion just flows in moments which come and go and...yours are like the waves of an ocean...now we all know...where passions must come from and to where go... all would know...when big poets like you glow......in the youth of life all are born like ROBERT BROWNING... LOVE POETS SO MANY...You too have the genes come out in plenty... let the world see.... I see it coming from thee...

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Lopamudra Mishra 01 April 2018

Lines of full of passion, and love reveal the strength behind the bond,

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Prativa Rani 11 November 2017

Loved these beautiful lines of this poem. The fluids of passion, The wave of fusion Or our carnal desire, On the ocean of time, Under the yellow sky Of our separation. 10 for the poem.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 June 2016

You are The blue alphabets Of the paper boat, That floats on The fluids of passion, The wave of fusion Or our carnal desire, On the ocean of time, Under the yellow sky Of our separation. Beautiful lines. Love it.

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Prativa Rani 08 November 2017

I agree with you Didi about this poem.

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Sabita Sahoo 08 June 2016

You are The living poems Of my tears, The living letters Of my blood. Your words are like the oasis of the desert. Thanks for this poem.

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Prativa Rani 08 November 2017

I agree Sabita mam with you on these great remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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