Theo Williams

Rookie (14/05/94 / Australia)

You Are My Sunrise - Poem by Theo Williams

The sun is smiling as I open my eyes
Birds serenading the awoken sky.
I watch from my window the sun climbing a hill
Spreading its glimmer so beautiful.

Trees catch the amber and red glow
Rising sun embracing me with love she bestows.
Caresses the clouds with her pink gleams
And sees her reflection in the crystal blue stream.

I look up at the cerulean sky
I feel God deposit heaven in my eyes.
This view is that of celestial
Giving a blessing upon the terrestrial.

She gives me hope to conquer my day
Free my problems and take my sorrows away.
She quenches my soul with kind bliss
And injects myself with tenderness.

My dear girl you have me in a paradise
My dear beauty you have me mesmerised
Because you are my lovely sun rise.
I love you.


Comments about You Are My Sunrise by Theo Williams

  • Alicia Meyers (8/3/2012 12:36:00 AM)

    If I heard those exact words from a guy I like, I would be his forever. Such beautiful words used in this writing. :) (Report)Reply

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  • Nurain Ali-balogun (7/5/2012 3:19:00 AM)

    Vividly imaginative in a simple, yet mildly complex way. I love it. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/3/2012 10:01:00 PM)

    a great romance love it (Report)Reply

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  • Swati Kukreti (7/3/2012 2:03:00 AM)

    nice effort and quite vivvid imagination...Keep it Up (Report)Reply

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  • Habib Akewusola (7/2/2012 8:11:00 PM)

    HELLO MR WILLIAMS....... i guess we share the rhythm in our poems....... you are on the right path...... you need no teacher keep reading other poets works and you automatically adjust your style....... i love this (Report)Reply

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/2/2012 1:30:00 PM)

    Lovely poem - you may like to read mine entitled Sunrise. (Report)Reply

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  • Tammie Aimson (7/2/2012 3:20:00 AM)

    this is vey good, i really like it. x (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 2, 2012



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