You Are Real Me Poem by M. Asim Nehal

You Are Real Me

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Don't go far, away from me
I need you; demand is from bit in me
You are my guiding force
You are my real ME.

Wind touches and goes
Rain falls and water flows
Don't leave me in drum's doll
Life asks me to roll.

Signs are plenty
The mind is empty
The heart is Valente
Thoughts are divalent

Saturday, April 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 20 April 2016

Great flow, rhythm and rhyme! A lovely cadence of the good old classic poetry!

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Aarifa Almas 18 April 2016

I need you, demand is from bit in me... Beautiful expression from a yearning heart within.. Heart touching poem.. Nihalji Thank you for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 18 April 2016

you are the master in these subject lovely poem thanks-10

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 April 2016

You are my guiding force! Nice piece of work.

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