You Are That Swan Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

You Are That Swan

Rating: 5.0


Your are the gracious swan

Drunken with my kisses blue and warm

Land into the lake of my heart

Dip your head of desire

Into the semi-hot water of longing

That fills the valley of my heart



With the golden sunshine,

With the blue moon shine,

Full with wild roses,

And shade of Earth



A speechless wind

cold and calm

Sings your arrival

At this hour of the dawn.

You Are That Swan
Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love and dreams,swan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 05 October 2017

Wow so romantic subhas.. Beautiful lines

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thanks dear Rini for the nice remarks and inspiring words.

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Lopamudra Mishra 01 April 2018

Intensity of love is reflected in the lines, beautiful.

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Rajendra Rout 30 November 2017

Wow so romantic poem.sir i enjoy this poem.thanks for shaired this poem....10++++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

With the golden sunshine, With the blue moon shine, Full with wild roses, And shade of Earth A great poem for appreciation, Love the imageries and warm eros. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thanks Rini for the nice remarks and inspiring words.

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Susan Williams 06 October 2017

Very sensual and full of warm imagery. And by the way, I really really like this one- -A speechless wind- that combination stopped me in my tracks. A 10 for this lovely piece of writing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thanks my dear friend for the warm remarks so encouraging.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 05 October 2017

Your are the gracious swan Drunken with my kisses blue and warm Land into the lake of my heart Dip your head of desire Into the semi-hot water of longing That fills the valley of my heart With the golden sunshine, With the blue moon shine, Full with wild roses, And shade of Earth.This poem is a very creative and a very nice poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thanks Soumya for the nice remarks and inspiring words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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