You Have The Magic Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

You Have The Magic

Rating: 4.8


i want to live with you forever
you are my dream, joy, hope
i think always, all the time about you
you make me to breathe and live meaningful
i wait until you shine like a magical star
you glitter like a diamond in the eyes of all
i hunt all the hidden treasures but...
you have the MAGIC....MY DEAR DOLL

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
mother's long to see the child shine like a diamond of star!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Sebastian 16 June 2016

What a lovely song of a mother's heart! ! ! Mother's love is always profound. You expressed that well in your write.

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Magic is felt, so the words reflect, feel of every loving mother I hope, thanks for the review

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2016

I think always, all the time about you! ! Great care from a mother. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2016

A mothers heart is full of love for her kids. She wants her kids to rise like a shining star in life. Such a nice drop! !

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Thanks for the comment, obviously it's every mother's feel, literate or illiterate, elite or ordinary, welcome dear for the review

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Sekharan Pookkat 06 June 2016

wat a magical imagination! kids are treasures of life thanks for sharing

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Very true every child is God's blessings, upbringing matters the way they shine, parents must play a responsible role, mend to be righteous to show the right path, whether we r single parent or parents is not enough are we the parent matters, thanks for the review

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Sranisha Francis 06 June 2016

i want to live with you forever you are my dream, joy, hope Beautifull words.

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Thanks dear, to quote and comment, on it, welcome

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