You Hold My Hand Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You Hold My Hand

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Within deep love I share mind
I know you feel this there
To take care of mine you feel
You have promised to come on.

You are very cute and nice
I am too built in your frame
I transfer my love in wind
Sitting in meditation I feel.

I have to learn to walk here
On Earth I have to play, read
Holding my hand you teach me
I shall know the art of writing.

I am standing to see you in up
You come to take me in love
I want to rest in your nice lap
Oh my father, you hold my hand.

Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

The life of a human interacting with nature is amazingly presented in your poem, one should learn the art to interact with nature and learn to take benefits from it in return also pay the nature its true reward bu not polluting, protecting and implanting new and fresh plants....A thought provoking poem indeed, Sir.....10+

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Christopher Buckley 16 October 2020

Wisdom of God is great hand for us. We should behold his hand and swim this ocean of material world.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 March 2019

Cute And Nice! Lovely and attractive. 👫 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 05 December 2018

This child- father relationship is the one we have to develop towards God! A beautiful write!

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Shahin Latif 24 November 2015

Great narrated work. Your thought delighted to me. Thank you so much.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

your meditation will surely take you there thanks -10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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