You live in the world's wonderland
You are a queen on the moon's sand
Come down to my dear motherland
I want to touch your tender hand
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This is just great. Nicely rhymed too with a great flow. A vision of a perfect 'angel' made so vivid that is so yearned to be held physically. Great write.
hey thats a great poem its deep and catchy you are a good writer
this was nice not too explicit but nice ending