Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Saturday, September 15, 2012

You Live In The World's Wonderland Comments

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You live in the world's wonderland
You are a queen on the moon's sand
Come down to my dear motherland
I want to touch your tender hand
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Kelvin Owusu 17 September 2012

this was nice not too explicit but nice ending

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 September 2012

what a wish! May your wish be fulfilled!

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Nurain Ali-balogun 17 September 2012

This is just great. Nicely rhymed too with a great flow. A vision of a perfect 'angel' made so vivid that is so yearned to be held physically. Great write.

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Stevie Taite 16 September 2012

So cute. Like the naughty ending!

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Black On Black Arts 15 September 2012

hey thats a great poem its deep and catchy you are a good writer

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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