Sunday, May 18, 2014

You Made Me Cry Comments

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You dehumidified your all tears
and lent me to make me cry.

Oh Niger!
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ramesh rai
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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Beautiful poem. Moon will bear the stain, stars will not twinkle as they witnessed that humanity lost its pace... Loved reading it.

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Amitava Sur 01 June 2014

Loved the poem in expressing your emotions... very nice in deed

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Dave Walker 25 May 2014

An emotion packed poem, a great write.

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sorrowness perfectly written a good poem and likes it.

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The mighty river, the stars, and the moon cannot come to help in this hour of need. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 18 May 2014

Lost in a cruel world of suffering that nature's light can't remove our pain of the stain of hardships Superb write!

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