*you Pick A Title* Poem by SmashLey Sweetie Simons

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Rating: 2.3


I Have A Very Soft Heart
And When I Get Some1 I Love Upset
My Heart Just Starts Hurting So Badly Deep Down Inside
Makes Me Always Break Down And Cry
I Try To Please My Family & Friends
But I Try Even Harder To Please My Boyfriend
Because Without Him I Am Nothing
So I Try All My Hardest Not To Do Anything Wrong
...But Just To Say That.....If I Ever Got Him Upset....
Then I Would Have To Try Even Harder..Not To Punish Myself...
I Cry&Think...If Im Really Making My Babe Happy?
When We Talk...Sometymes Its Lyke My Babe Is Unhappy
I Really Love Him...With All My HEART
That If We Were To Breakup...
I Would Forever Have A Deep Hole In My Heart
I'd Be Lost Without Him...Unhappy Forever...
I'd Stay Locked Up In My Room...Thinking, Wondering
Wondering Why? ...What Did I do? ....
Did I Say Something Wrong? ...
I'd Do Anything To Be With Him
ALWAYS & FOREVER
So When I Hear That Your Hurting...I Just Feel So Guilty
Lyke Because Its My Fault Your Unhappy
So Baby I'll Do Anything To Make You Happy
Because Babe I Really H8te To Hear That Your Upset
That Just Makes My Heart Start Hurting So Badly
Feels Lyke Im Getting Stabbed With A Knife
Because I Hurt My Baby
Sometymes That When I Feel So...So...SO.. BAD...
....Because I Hurt The 1 I Love
I Feel Lyke I Should Just Go & Die! ! !
But I Know That If I Die...It Will Not Only Make My Family Cry
But The 1 Who I Call My Love...Will Live His Life Wondering Why?
Why Did She Die? ....What Could I Have Done?
But I Hope You know Baby.
That My Love For You Will Never Die.....
I Hope You never Forget Me....But Babe..
Its Your Choice To LOVE Me...
But I'll Always Be Your GURL
FOREVER & ALWAYS

ILOVEU BABY; -*

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Mcduffie 13 December 2011

Very emotional! And a fantastically great write! ! :) Good job! 10 out of 10! Keep those marvelous poems coming! ;)

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Eli Medina 28 October 2010

nice poem i love it, it has a rusty cage feel to it.......remember one thing- to live yr life on egg shells is no way to live...to love it not to do all things for one...but its also to tell them when there wrong as well.

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Robin Machorro 23 May 2010

i really like this poem alot it reminds me of me and my ex cuz i always hated when i made him sad or mad or upset i put all the blame on me and i always felt really bad so i can really relate to your poem keep up the good work :)

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Adam Reed 11 May 2010

wow ash you fell harrrd lol. now that really is helplessly in love. you seem like a nice person. remember now. he is supposed to try and make you happy too. you deserve no less :) . good writing keep it up!

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Casey Wiggins 11 May 2010

When I started looking for poems that described exactly what was going on with me and my life, I had no clue that this site would have them. This poem is exactly what's going on with my boyfriend and me and I just want him to know that I would do anything to make him happy. He has my whole heart and this poem says it all. So i give props to ya girl! I love it!

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