SmashLey Sweetie Simons

Rookie - 0 Points (April 19,1993 / Wopo, Montana)

*you Pick A Title* - Poem by SmashLey Sweetie Simons

I Have A Very Soft Heart
And When I Get Some1 I Love Upset
My Heart Just Starts Hurting So Badly Deep Down Inside
Makes Me Always Break Down And Cry
I Try To Please My Family & Friends
But I Try Even Harder To Please My Boyfriend
Because Without Him I Am Nothing
So I Try All My Hardest Not To Do Anything Wrong
...But Just To Say That.....If I Ever Got Him Upset....
Then I Would Have To Try Even Harder..Not To Punish Myself...
I Cry&Think...If Im Really Making My Babe Happy?
When We Talk...Sometymes Its Lyke My Babe Is Unhappy
I Really Love Him...With All My HEART
That If We Were To Breakup...
I Would Forever Have A Deep Hole In My Heart
I'd Be Lost Without Him...Unhappy Forever...
I'd Stay Locked Up In My Room...Thinking, Wondering
Wondering Why? ...What Did I do? ....
Did I Say Something Wrong? ...
I'd Do Anything To Be With Him
ALWAYS & FOREVER
So When I Hear That Your Hurting...I Just Feel So Guilty
Lyke Because Its My Fault Your Unhappy
So Baby I'll Do Anything To Make You Happy
Because Babe I Really H8te To Hear That Your Upset
That Just Makes My Heart Start Hurting So Badly
Feels Lyke Im Getting Stabbed With A Knife
Because I Hurt My Baby
Sometymes That When I Feel So...So...SO.. BAD...
....Because I Hurt The 1 I Love
I Feel Lyke I Should Just Go & Die! ! !
But I Know That If I Die...It Will Not Only Make My Family Cry
But The 1 Who I Call My Love...Will Live His Life Wondering Why?
Why Did She Die? ....What Could I Have Done?
But I Hope You know Baby.
That My Love For You Will Never Die.....
I Hope You never Forget Me....But Babe..
Its Your Choice To LOVE Me...
But I'll Always Be Your GURL
FOREVER & ALWAYS

ILOVEU BABY; -*


Comments about *you Pick A Title* by SmashLey Sweetie Simons

  • Anthony Mcduffie (12/13/2011 12:33:00 AM)


    Very emotional! And a fantastically great write! ! :) Good job! 10 out of 10! Keep those marvelous poems coming! ;) (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (6/30/2011 11:50:00 AM)


    Handcuffed to the chair of the past, it is not easy to get up and look for the key because the vivid memories still wandering throughout your heart and mind.Love becomes joy and pain. LOVE'S CONFESSION should be titled this heart touching, well penned and poignant write! Excellent! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! If time permits, please read and enjoy any of my poems in PH and Poetfreak like this one below from PF
    http: //www.poetfreak.com/text/70306/who-am-i.html
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  • Eli Medina (10/28/2010 1:08:00 PM)


    nice poem i love it, it has a rusty cage feel to it.......remember one thing- to live yr life on egg shells is no way to live...to love it not to do all things for one...but its also to tell them when there wrong as well. (Report) Reply

  • (5/23/2010 7:18:00 PM)


    i really like this poem alot it reminds me of me and my ex cuz i always hated when i made him sad or mad or upset i put all the blame on me and i always felt really bad so i can really relate to your poem
    keep up the good work :)
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  • Adam Reed (5/11/2010 4:49:00 PM)


    wow ash you fell harrrd lol. now that really is helplessly in love. you seem like a nice person. remember now. he is supposed to try and make you happy too. you deserve no less :) . good writing keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 12:02:00 PM)


    When I started looking for poems that described exactly what was going on with me and my life, I had no clue that this site would have them. This poem is exactly what's going on with my boyfriend and me and I just want him to know that I would do anything to make him happy. He has my whole heart and this poem says it all. So i give props to ya girl! I love it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 11, 2010



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