You'Re Still There Poem by Baby Blue

You'Re Still There

Rating: 3.0


i met this guy, and
he invited me on a date.
hes really sweet, and he deserves alot;
alot better than me.
cause i still like you.

so you saw me last night,
with him by my side.
and when i told you that
i had told him yes,
you seemed so sad.

if you like me, as i once
thought that you had;
make a move, say something!
i can't stand this waiting,
please say something:
say something fast!

written 12-04-07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 01 April 2009

nice write impatience is the present identity,10+

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Katharine O'Neal 14 January 2008

the desperation of the speaker and the sadness of the situation are well displayed. the most striking, to me, was the speaker's point that their fiances deserves alot better because she still likes the person she's talking to in her head. good choice to address this to the man she actually loves, but not actually say her thoughts outloud to him, nice work ^^ Kath

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Beautiful Cole 13 December 2007

Gosh Im Speachless This Is A beautiful Poem! ! love pumkin

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