I saw a bright light
Just as all seemed lost
I stretched forth my hands
Hoping to get a grip of myself
My efforts were in vain
For even though i could see the light, I couldn't reach for it
But you just came from nowhere
Just to lend me a helping hand
Yes indeed, YOU saved me! !
As I passed through
I never thought of YOU
I ran all around
I did all YOU told me not to
Eventually I became an outlaw
Until fate caught up with me
Then I realized that I had failed
But in the midst of the storm, YOU stood by me
Truly, YOU saved me! !
My destiny began to change
My body became weak
My soul could no longer endure
The pain in my heart grew stronger
All because I failed
I felt this was the beginning of the end
I felt as though I was being tortured
I never for once remembered YOU
Yet still, YOU saved me! !
My last days I will dedicate to YOU
My house will now be YOUR temple
I will find a way to make it up to YOU
I will strive just to do as YOU wish
For this might be the last chance I have
Not to say I am repaying YOU
But just to show gratitude cos YOU saved me! !
A very enjoyable read on a poem of thankfulness. Nicely written!
It is great. This poem definitely took me somewhere... for a moment...Nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very inspirational. Really touches the emotions. A great way to show gratitude. Thanks.