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Ha, great writing, I love the descriptions of loss, that is beaten again and again and won't give up.

great ending. nice work here.

Gosh.....exact lines to steal the heart of any gurl, i guess! ! ! ! i loved it.

Geez Eric, you continue yo amaze me with your words. You have fast become one of the most significant poets of my generation and all you write just flows so naturally as if the one interrupted thought. And it's not only that but it's the impact you leave in what you say. Grateful as ever I am to be privy to your poems.

A great poem, like it.