Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Gold Star - 7,773 Points (Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA)

You Smile In Love - Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Oh dear little dove you smile,
Fly in sky in freedom far mile.
Father has given feathers to fly,
Remain happy you never cry.

Shyness you do not at all feel,
You have ever amazing zeal.
Thrill of wisdom you hold far,
Go on flying you kiss light star.

Scar you leave in lovely moon,
Go on flying, reach you soon.
Noon or night you do not see,
Light your life feel mind thee.

Right direction you do choose,
Sing wisdom you spread news.
God has told he will come soon,
Washing sins he will give boon.

Love waves flow in lovely sky,
To feel life sure you do ever try
You smile in love little far mile,
Oh dear little dove you smile.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life, nature, spiritual


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is based on happiness and smile to speak about wisdom of God. Dove is a little bird that flies in happiness in far sky and thinks to kiss light and star. Dove has freedom to fly and that is why there is no need to cry in sorrow. Holding thrill of wisdom gives strength here to feel this freedom. In lovely love waves flow and father gives promise that he will come to wash sins of human beings. His boon will flow here in waves definitely and that is why dove should smile here flying so high in sky. Every human being should know this wisdom and hold light in life for up lifting self. This poem is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.

Comments about You Smile In Love by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (10/6/2016 3:28:00 AM)

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    xwonderful poem dear mam...
    20 Sep 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply
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    xnice poem.
    20 Sep 2015 by Amal Al jashemi | Reply
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    xLovely write mam. Tfs
    20 Sep 2015 by manisha uniyal | Reply
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    xvery nicely penned
    21 Sep 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply
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    x.........most beautiful and inspiring, also...love this ★
    1 Oct 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply
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    xWhat a loveliest title. So uplifting to read this most divine poetry time and again. I just needed this this very European morn. Thank you!
    24 Oct 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/27/2015 6:09:00 AM)


    To smile! Uplifts the joy in oneself. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/20/2015 5:01:00 AM)


    A beautiful dedication spreading the message of love and peace..... the most needed two things for a spite ridden world! Enjoyed much! (Report) Reply

  • (9/19/2015 11:15:00 PM)


    ........this is very beautiful, a most lovely write...love this ★ (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/19/2015 9:42:00 PM)


    Verily, if bird can fly, man has the wisdom and imagination to feel the truth
    Loved reading the poem
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  • Kelly Kurt (9/19/2015 8:55:00 PM)


    A lovely, inspirational poem, Bhargabi (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2015



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