Thursday, November 17, 2016

Your Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like flowers they bloom
Their innocence always looms
Even saddest heart overcomes gloom
They fill your life with air in the balloon
...
Read full text

M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Indira Renganathan 18 November 2016

An enjoyable write on children with a comparison with flowers....very true...thank you Asim for this lovely poem..also thanks for your comment on mine- 10

1 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 17 November 2016

Such a beautiful poem on flowers that bloom from human plants.

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2016

Children are beautiful like flowers and they are very innocent. We can never ignore moon in far galaxy. Children long for brightness. May God bring happiness for them.10

1 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 17 November 2016

So beautifully expressed. Children are truly the best thing on earth. They make this world bright with their innocence and laughter. Full of affection, a lovely write.10

1 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
Close
Error Success