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Your Eyes, Me Blind - Poem by the chinmay

The ocean like watery blue eyes,
Eyes which are full of languages,
Languages which i tried to read,
Deep and deep, meaningful and meaningful,
I read ur eyes and get mesmerise,
But what i read is impossible to describe
When my eyes walk inside your eyes,
I start to fly around in their skies,
These are ocean like wide and of endless size,
I pierce very deep into them when i look in ur eyes,
Angel like you i am unable to find,
Looking into your eyes made my mind blind.

Topic(s) of this poem: eyes

Comments about Your Eyes, Me Blind by the chinmay

  • Souren Mondal (11/10/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    A very nice poem, and I agree with Kelly below..

    P: S: Your use of the colloquial 'ur' instead of 'your' and keeping the 'I' non-capitalised are also wonderful stylistic feature of this poem that complements the brilliant diction...

    Thanks for sharing Chinmay :)
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    The chinmay (11/10/2015 3:49:00 AM)

    hahaha: -) ...thnx Mr.

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  • Vishal Sharma (11/9/2015 4:11:00 AM)

    lovely metaphors and wise words used in the poetry (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 4:54:00 PM)

    Very amazing expression wisely shared in this page really. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/8/2015 3:53:00 PM)

    I too am mesmerized by eyes. Thank you, The (Report) Reply

    The chinmay (11/9/2015 7:27:00 AM)

    its my pleasure

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 8, 2015

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