Your Feeling Poem by Luo Zhihai

君之情

鹤游云海，千里遨翔收斗气
君走江湖，一声清啸卷天风
婉转莺歌，林间草里轻音乐
叮咚泉水，月下花前重感情

注：第一三句柯宜超作，第二四句罗志海作


Your Feeling

Cranes swam in the cloudy sea
collected the fighting spirits
soaring in a thousand miles

You walked on the rivers and lakes
a sound of the clear roaring
rolled the wind in the sky

The oriole's singing was mild and indirect
in the forest in the grass
the light music

Ding dong spring
below the moon before the flowers
the heavy feeling

Note: first and third sentences by Ke Yichao.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.


4/22/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝 罗志海译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第8337首对联体诗
The 8,337th Two Pairs of Couplets