Your Kiss Comments

From Platonic Plane ~ ‘And our touch is impossible to be achieved.’ ~ Why not ride on colorful wings of emotion/imagination…enjoy the Magic of smooch…loluuud….finely chiseled… Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Dream-like. Too good to wake up from: -) N

this is a sexy poem good job...

This is a beautiful piece of work 10

Poignant, so touching to read 10

I think your poems are the poetic image and full of limpid words. 10

Beauty - it captures the state of mind so well! ....10

lots of images lots of meaning.....great piece 10

could reach my deeply dormant eyelash I would have slipped my mind to dream................... oh what kind of imagery blazing the glory of love winter world may feel fire roaring deep by sweet warmth, excellent exposition of mirth by the thrills of romance trembling over blushed lips, thirst slowly seeps the blue, ingenoius write by imagery,10+++, thanks for vsharing

ammmmmmazing wording dear mari! REFLECTIVE! THE END COMPELLED ME TO THINK LOT! excellent! 10+

Spellbound! Immaculate! ! Romance galore Ten+++ to your kiss! ! ! dr. sakti

'If the kiss of your lips, slipped on my dying breast could reach my deeply dormant eyelash' A powerful, literally poetic beginning.10.

a touch of romance nicely woven!

lovely sensational piece....