Your Kiss Poem by Marieta Maglas

Your Kiss

Rating: 5.0


The kiss of your lips,
Is slipping on my sad breast
To reach my deeply dormant eyelash.....

Your devoted tranquility is so pure,
And your soul is so beautiful...

We are together while lying in the sunshine...

Lost memories

Come back again
Into my mind
With their meaning.

Tell me that the world is the same
And nothing has changed,


Though we are aware that
We are so different,
And our touch is
Impossible to achieve.


Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 25 June 2009

lovely sensational piece....

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Vijay Sai R 02 July 2009

a touch of romance nicely woven!

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'If the kiss of your lips, slipped on my dying breast could reach my deeply dormant eyelash' A powerful, literally poetic beginning.10.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 01 September 2009

Spellbound! Immaculate! ! Romance galore Ten+++ to your kiss! ! ! dr. sakti

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 September 2009

ammmmmmazing wording dear mari! REFLECTIVE! THE END COMPELLED ME TO THINK LOT! excellent! 10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 August 2010

From Platonic Plane ~ ‘And our touch is impossible to be achieved.’ ~ Why not ride on colorful wings of emotion/imagination…enjoy the Magic of smooch…loluuud….finely chiseled… Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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nomad omnia 28 November 2009

Dream-like. Too good to wake up from: -) N

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Eyan Desir 21 November 2009

this is a sexy poem good job...

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Adrianne Colton 20 November 2009

This is a beautiful piece of work 10

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Agnes Parker 16 November 2009

Poignant, so touching to read 10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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