Your Love Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Your Love
Your love
will be awaken
my unconscious mind,
by a soft wind,
when you caress
with a gentle kiss,
on my bosom
but I always miss
that cool breeze
As I'm conscious
In your love.
nice rhythm and use of wind/breeze analogy. The ending but, that breeze-always I may miss is not clear to me.
No big words to tell big things, even in simple one the biggest can come in....like you write it so simple, smooth and sweet...and it's rare..that was priceless love to read here :) _Unwritten Soul
This is so beautiful, Vipins! I could feel the breeze of love I'm missing. You have a great way with words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 2:06:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice rhythm and very sweet poem like cherry. This poem has become my cup of tea for its lucidity! Brilliant work dear poet!