Your Poems Are Redolent Of Spring Poem by Liza Sud

Your Poems Are Redolent Of Spring

Rating: 5.0


Your poems are redolent of spring.
In them I hear the chirping of a warbler.
Transforming all in words, thus they reveal
behind the sounds meaning of a wonder.

In the beginning was the Word, and height
Is shown in vocabulary, deity.
And happiness of life, oddly enough, -
Is just with endless dictionary labour.

From Dickens, his vocabulary's might
Effect is great for soothing and abetting.
Transparent feelings sacredly to light
From blight by words at once are manifested.

No need for all hysterically cramps,
The torment of unspoken dummy feelings
Lays in verse coffin by a verbal pulse
And with a new pulse rises very clearly.

Vocabulary is like opium,
Eternal race for the distinctive meaning -
Where all is found. And your favorite loss
Will find itself in the words: "We are living! "

Mordacity, nit-picking, nagging, shots,
Revival from vocabulary changes -
Will batten down all the holes in thoughts
will make you for this happy and contented!

When all around is frowzy and stale,
rapacity besieges every moment
To solve the riddle Dickens briskly came -
Compared to "love" -vocabulary's broader.

And tired nervousness shambles away,
forever wanes into the poems' coffin,
And lightness comes up quickly in new words,
Light as a child from a dot is reborning.

Monday, November 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: idea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 23 November 2020

To solve the riddle Dickens briskly came - Compared to " love" -vocabulary's broader. ...... forever wanes into the poems' coffin, And lightness comes up quickly in new words, ///excellently poetic expression; so, let all nervousness of life come to the coffin of poem and let it be lightness thru the poetic wise expression..

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 November 2020

This poem is good. Its got deeper meaning and is one of those you read several times to soak it in. Great stuff

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Varsha M 23 November 2020

In fact your poem is redolent of spring. Your expression, your understanding your flow just if poetic glow. Mesmerizing. Full score. In my poem list.

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