* Your Whispers * Poem by ANJALI SINHA

* Your Whispers *

Rating: 3.1

Your whispers I heard
Even though in a crowd
From your sorrows of silence
Rose my song of love
I flew past you
Like zephyr so gentle
But you heard not my groans
Cos youre lost in your world

The crimson of the wines
From the goblets you have
To thee I swear
From the depths of my heart
There shall not be another
Another Majnu
Like how thou art


~ Jon London ~ 21 January 2010

This is a beautifully expressed write my lovely, your words blended with the narrative tone really does lift this piece to a whole new level.....Stunning work sweetheart........Lovely to be back reading your works again my friend.

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anurag duggal 21 January 2010

am in turmoil am in distress may no longer want to carry on for my life is just a boring mess what my hope if not thy promise the promise of the promising meeting.....

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Sandra Fowler 21 January 2010

Two souls in tune and the music is beautiful.10/10.Anjali. Love, Sandra

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What wonderful whispers!

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Ken E Hall 22 January 2010

Beautiful start to this poem to hold the reader who cannot let go you are the perfect wordsmith forging even wonderful whispers ++10 regards

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Drashi Shah 13 December 2014

great awesome and very nice.......

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Drashi Shah 13 December 2014

nice.... awesome..... great

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Rahul Aithal 01 August 2010

Wonderful, Anjali. Keep writing. Rahul.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2010

lovely i enjoyéd it thank u invite u to send ur precious comments on my poems too

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 March 2010

'like zephyr so gentle' your words always touch me and it stays timeless... 10++++ clicked but it didnt appear becoz of techno problem.

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