The waves of inferno
Can be felt in far of land too
Even though the eyes can't see
The vibes of discomfort reverie
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This poem shows your intelligence with right choice of words... 'Zenith is to be felt So that you don't miss the belt'...very true...5 stars
Yes, a little aim is to crime...so one should aim at zenith.... Well penned...
Capture that moment and freeze it in your heart forever. Lovely poem Varsha.10++
बहुत खूब जिंदगी के दो पहलू सुख - दुख, सर्दी - गर्मी, अच्छाई - बुराई को बखूबी बतया हैं फिर भी जीने की कोशिश करना चाहता हूँ, शायद उसके हर पहलू को अपने जीवन मे उतारना चाहता हूँ।। बहुत आभार आपका
A fabulous composition.... sincerely appreciated and admired!