Comments about Robert Miley
Wrote this after my girlfriend broke up with me, trying to get back with her. She once read me her poems, they were really good but none of them rhymed. I wrote her in this notebook explaining my feelings for her, but she didn't react to it how I wanted. This is the first ever poem I've written, so don't judge me too harshly. Some of it may be simple. I wrote this to her, didn't plan on posting it up, but I want some feedback on it.
If you love someone, set them free.
If they don't come back, it wasn't meant to be.
That's how the saying goes,
But with you, I can't seem to...