Sandy Sat

Rookie (June 1,1989 / Vancouver)

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Hi, I'm Sandy, and I'm sixteen years old. I'm not really good at writing peotry, but I enjoy it tremendously. I've posted some of my poems up because I have to submit them in for an English project any I'm not really sure if they are good and it would be great if I got some feedback about how they are. That would really boost up my confidence in writing poems. I'll take good and bad replies. ... more »

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  • Willow Moon Pearce Willow Moon Pearce (10/23/2005 4:20:00 PM)

    I particularly enjoyed ' Deathbed ' You have made a good start with this art form.........willow

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Deathbed

What will happen when I die?
Will God send me to heaven or hell?
Will I become,
An angel?
Or be sinned?

Will I be laid on my deathbed?
Dressed in white, pure
My sins all washed away,
As rain washes dirt away
Where God will stand there,
Awaiting my arrival

OR

Will I be laid on my deathbed?
Clothed in black, impure,
My sins condemned by god
As a weight on my shoulder
Where the devil drags me away,
As I scream for forgiveness

What will happen?
All I can do is go on with life,
And when the time comes,
My ...

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