Aastha Uppal

Rookie - 29 Points (7th march 1990)

Aastha Uppal Poems

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  • Fabrizio Frosini Fabrizio Frosini (1/5/2015 7:53:00 AM)

    Hi Aastha,

    I've read 3 poems of yours:
    2. I'll never be loved
    3. Should I Hate Him?

    - n.1 is a more philosophical, I'd say, lyric;
    - n.2: a simple and yet awesome song, filled with sorrow and loss. It's a touching, absorbing lyric..
    - n.3 is a well plotted & well written work, with an interesting and sincere point of view.

    All of the 3 above are nice poems. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing

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  • mohsin amin khan (4/24/2010 4:42:00 AM)

    glory in life is when verses fill us with the pious nature
    you have written all poems well
    keep it up
    best of luck
    it is so good to read your poems

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Best Poem of Aastha Uppal

... The Hidden Eyes...

Was it a howl or warning from God
Was it the outcome of reversal of nature's laws
Whatever it was, the world had faced a great loss

The fierce wind will stop
The stormy waves would also halt
But will those innocent eyes hidden in the sand
Ever stop to watch.

Gazing towards the open sky
Still awaiting someone would come and try
To quench his thirst and comfort his cry
But none could alter the game of destiny
And so another pair of innocent eyes turned down.

Nothing new to the custom
Was he submitted in the lap of ...

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