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... The Hidden Eyes...

Rating: 2.8

Was it a howl or warning from God
Was it the outcome of reversal of nature's laws
Whatever it was, the world had faced a great loss

The fierce wind will stop
The stormy waves would also halt
But will those innocent eyes hidden in the sand
Ever stop to watch.

Gazing towards the open sky

Still awaiting someone would come and try
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2010

those innocent eyes hidden in the sand! ! ! very nice.

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Raju Baruah 21 April 2010

...real tribute...with such a vibrant melancholy. ...nice piece of work...with brilliant crafting. Thanks 10+

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Afzal Shauq 19 April 2010

so sweet and heart touching poem is this one..enjoyed it alot...lovely 10/10+++

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 March 2010

oh, this is a heartfelt poem. very mature and sincere. i loved the honesty. good that you take up such issues in ur poetry. would like to read more of you. thank you.

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Siddharth Singh 11 March 2010

A very sincere and heartfelt tribute to the aweful tragedy.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2016

Gazing towards the open sky Still awaiting someone would come and try To quench his thirst and comfort his cry But none could alter the game of destiny And so another pair of innocent eyes turned down. innocent children who died in Tsunami.......their final cries, hope in the midst of hopelessness.......... such terrible misery of death... all these are reflected in your poem..... a wonderful poem. thank yo u dear poet. tony

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Kumud Ranjan 14 September 2015

Great to find someone dedicating such a good piece of work to those who rarely get anything... true - they are rejected, dejected and neglected waiting to be cuddled, to be held!

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Seule Coeur 27 February 2012

Will those questions in his Universal eyes come to an end? Artistic piece of work.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 20 February 2012

A poet with a purpose you are i guess...such a well penned poem..a perfect tribute to the souls long gone. Keep it up...

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Deep Mukherjee 28 January 2012

Real gem of a artistic piece :) with an ironical name! ! ! ! loved it! !

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