Aastha Uppal

Rookie - 29 Points (7th march 1990)

Should I Hate Him? - Poem by Aastha Uppal

The goodness in bad will never die
The bad in goodness dormantly lies
Everything bad is good it means
Or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ?

The impureness of purity is always quoted
The pureness of impurity is never noted
Kill the killer take his life, ought to be punished for his crime
it's the end of a criminal they say
But it's also the death of a daughters' hero
Just see her pray

The strong protective hands she'll miss
Her dad's hug, his mere presence is all she wishes
Her hero had a darker side
She knows not, she accepts not and she cares not
Bursting within her is what none can answer
'Everything bad is good it means
or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ? '

The love for his son was not fake
Yes, the devilish eyes dreamt of his son's bright future
Not like him... becoming a butcher
Those blooded hands pat on his sons' back
His holding the son's bicycle to ride on track
But none will ever happen again
His father's life back- the son wishes only if he could bargain
And bursting within him is what none can answer
'Everything bad is good it means
or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ? '

A smile rips apart her face
As today his teary mother does bake his favourite cake
For it's the death of the bad in her good son
Celebrating with the tears of sorrow, a joy;
The end of the evil son she never gave birth to
Her heart is numb for a vital part
of her heart will today be hung
For her entire life she so much wanted to kill the bad in him
And today she just has one thing to ask which none can answer-
'Everything bad is good it means
or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ? '

DEDICATED TO THE FAMILY MEMBERS OF CRIMINALS


Comments about Should I Hate Him? by Aastha Uppal

  • (4/16/2014 12:54:00 AM)


    Astounding poem, simple and to the point, regarding the other side of the coin.
    The relatives of the criminals, their innocence and goodness compared to the
    bad ones. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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  • Aranthabailu Ummar (10/5/2011 11:39:00 AM)


    call for seek to good in bad is good. comparing the careness of the daughter or loved one with the killer is fine. But when it made elaborate for no death for a kill began for more unhumane in our society. To keep out society and people in safety there should be a kill for a killing. crime cannot beglorified (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (8/5/2011 11:43:00 PM)


    this is such a beautiful write.simply amazing.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/17/2011 11:10:00 AM)


    Sometimes we become victims of circumstances. Nobody is perfect, here in New York City so far more than 10 politicians are doing jail time for corruption after proving their good deeds for years and now they disgraced. Only a man with wide open eyes and without greed can survive cleanly and avoid these missteps in life! Excellent write, well penned and poignant! Love and Peace for always! (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2010 3:40:00 AM)


    I'm highly impressed the way you've plotted the feelings of dearest ones of the criminals....Thatz really amazing..... No one is born criminal anways, it's the circumstances that draw him towards wrong path and no one is bad, it's the attitude of people that compel him to be bad...
    Nice written.
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  • (7/15/2010 2:27:00 PM)


    A completely good man is as rare as a completely bad man…Swami Vivekananda said every work breeds good and bad outcome…well absolute Good is that where one has no self interest… very wise poetry thanks sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (7/9/2010 12:40:00 PM)


    Very interesting perceptive, well written. Not many imagine a monster to most, can be a man to some, even a hero. (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2010 11:27:00 AM)


    Very strong concept...very neetly expressed..bravo (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2010 3:57:00 AM)


    Quite a piece, this one.
    Profound, sincere and thought provoking.
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  • Raju Baruah (5/8/2010 10:55:00 AM)


    magnificent writing with a good theme...

    The goodness in bad will never die
    The bad in goodness dormantly lies
    Everything bad is good it me....

    really a profound one...thanks
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  • Kumud Ranjan (5/7/2010 10:37:00 AM)


    And today she just has one thing to ask which none can answer-
    'Everything bad is good it means
    or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ?
    here ends the poem..with a genuine question about the brighter side of a criminal...a sinner though he is he is different for his family...and what you have depicted very lively..
    brilliantly written..full of emotion...very nice topic you have chosen too...10++++ from me...
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  • (5/7/2010 7:40:00 AM)


    its a very good peom......keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 6:18:00 AM)


    yours poem is really a great one it is so hard to comment on such a nice poem by words
    practically if we will see justice then every person should be given justice in this democratic country there have been so many poepl killed innocent and the decisions have not come yet from the paws of devil courts
    Ajmal kassab i think he is the central idea of this poem
    histroy will remember him as guilty but dont curse him who ever comments
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  • (5/7/2010 5:48:00 AM)


    very beautiful poem, very thoughtful.you will make a great poet, keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 3:53:00 AM)


    yeah...i can understand what you feel...but then there are sons and daughters of the victims too....they are sufferring meaninglessly..
    but yes, the question you ask is valid,
    what can we say, everything is so tragic, and heart-wrenching.
    that baastard should be hannged, thats all i know.

    good poem, pertinent.
    wanna see more from you.
    thank you.
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  • (5/7/2010 3:49:00 AM)


    A smile rips apart her face
    As today his teary mother does bakes his favourite cake
    For it's the death of the bad in her good son
    Celebrating with the tears of sorrow, a joy;
    The end of the evil son she never gave birth to
    Her heart is numb for a vital part
    of her heart will today be hung

    thanks for sharing.. this is a meaningful poem. impressive is idea and the way you expressed is professional enough..means you are quite well in writing a good poetry..liked this poem
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 10, 2011


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