Aastha Uppal

Rookie - 29 Points (7th march 1990)

.......The Alliance....... - Poem by Aastha Uppal

Never will they come face-to-face
And never will they together praise
All they have in common is the craze
To win the life's neverending race.

Efforts to unite them will go in vain
One will be hurt but both in pain
And they do know there's no gain
Unless they join hands
you'll travel in an undestined train.

Neither can you run nor surrender
Don't give up its a blunder
Make them agree give it a best shot
To keep trying is your last resort.

Never can they unite yet both are your part
Yes you are right they are your HEAD and HEART
Your head will always play a trick
And heart will always prick

Wait for the day when an Alliance will form
And you'll be free from this violent storm
That day you'll rule the world
So go ahead and conquer it all! ! ! !


-aAstha


Comments about .......The Alliance....... by Aastha Uppal

  • Aranthabailu Ummar (10/5/2011 11:26:00 AM)


    hopes still lingers, toleramce still endures
    may a day bring good for us
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  • (5/3/2010 2:03:00 AM)


    wow sweet poem is this one too..10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2010 11:07:00 AM)


    the eternal battle of head and heart.
    nice poem.
    'One will be hurt but both in pain'
    liked it.
    thank you.
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/28/2010 10:27:00 AM)


    Head vs heart
    When will it end
    When did it start
    Well done my friend. I really like it!
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/22/2010 8:14:00 AM)


    All they have in common is the craze
    To win the life's neverending race.

    Not they...................we all have this craze.........well written
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/11/2010 8:58:00 PM)


    Nice rhyming and I want to be part of the Alliance. (Report) Reply

  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (2/11/2010 7:50:00 PM)


    cheerful song! keep it up... (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2010 3:12:00 PM)


    you'll travel in an undestined train.

    wonderful poem, well espressed ideas to convey the message..
    10+

    Mari
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/10/2010 5:27:00 AM)


    You have written a wonderful poem, Aastha. I think it's too ideal that heart and mind join together to form an alliance. But some people do have balance in their lives. Great write. Keep up the good work...10/10.

    Naseer
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  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/21/2009 9:34:00 AM)


    What a poem...!
    A real imagination of the reality
    An honest message given...
    A complete 10 as the poem and the poetess deserve it...!
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  • (12/20/2009 12:28:00 PM)


    Never can they unite yet both are your part
    Yes you are right they are your HEAD and HEART
    Your heard will always play a trick
    And heart will always prick

    very innovative thought...u differentiated really splendid way..this s what the truth is..


    really impressing...
    keep on writing...10 from me...
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010


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