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.......The Alliance.......

Rating: 3.0

Never will they come face-to-face
And never will they together praise
All they have in common is the craze
To win the life's neverending race.

Efforts to unite them will go in vain
One will be hurt but both in pain
And they do know there's no gain
Unless they join hands
you'll travel in an undestined train.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 February 2010

Nice rhyming and I want to be part of the Alliance.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 11 February 2010

cheerful song! keep it up...

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Marieta Maglas 10 February 2010

you'll travel in an undestined train. wonderful poem, well espressed ideas to convey the message.. 10+ Mari

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 February 2010

You have written a wonderful poem, Aastha. I think it's too ideal that heart and mind join together to form an alliance. But some people do have balance in their lives. Great write. Keep up the good work...10/10. Naseer

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What a poem...! A real imagination of the reality An honest message given... A complete 10 as the poem and the poetess deserve it...!

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2011

hopes still lingers, toleramce still endures may a day bring good for us

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Afzal Shauq 03 May 2010

wow sweet poem is this one too..10/10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 March 2010

the eternal battle of head and heart. nice poem. 'One will be hurt but both in pain' liked it. thank you.

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Head vs heart When will it end When did it start Well done my friend. I really like it!

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 February 2010

All they have in common is the craze To win the life's neverending race. Not they...................we all have this craze.........well written

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