Aastha Uppal

Rookie - 29 Points (7th march 1990)

? ? ? Should The Pleading Be Heard? ? ? - Poem by Aastha Uppal

No one can define pain
i only wish happiness and sorrows we could strain
The tough times will pass, they say
But what if there's no hope no bright ray.

There's no spring no autumn
All i know is my heart's rotten
Tired of being dependent, being a lump
Surviving on nothing but a pump

i know not how many years have passed
Lying on this bed motionless like a carcass
Speechless, motionless no way can i express
My emotions are all dumped in my head
Believe me it's worse than being dead

i plead 'kill me' they call it a crime
wait everything will heal with time
They say everything can be cured
But i know never can you mend a dead soul
so i'll not be lured

EUTHANASIA they say is what i am asking for
Name it whatever you want i care not
They say its illegal taking a human's life
Are you kidding, i know not what is life

Betrayed by your love, you want to be killed
Failed in life, you want to be killed
Grieved, you want to be killed
Heart-broken, you want to be killed
Now tell me am i asking for a lot
i beg before you to relieve me please, don't let me rot

i beg before you to take my life
i plead before you for a new life
Shouldn't my pleading be heard, am i asking for a lot
Just do me a favour -kill me, don't let me rot.



Comments about ? ? ? Should The Pleading Be Heard? ? ? by Aastha Uppal

  • (1/19/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    nice one again...... (Report) Reply

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  • (1/17/2012 5:04:00 AM)

    A really good poem... Shows that Ur concerned about the people living in such agony... (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2012 1:49:00 AM)

    nice expressions of thoughts........ (Report) Reply

  • Aranthabailu Ummar (10/5/2011 11:32:00 AM)

    A weep without sound, but lure for self death will not justified
    god is the begining he is the last
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  • (9/27/2011 10:52:00 AM)

    Good write up.Well conceived, Pain remains undefined...yet there are plenty of dictionary 'explanation'.10/10. (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2010 5:37:00 AM)

    Words are short to say that you have written this one so wonderfully...... Just touched my heart........ Great job...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2010 9:47:00 PM)

    there is no spring no atumn then describing heart as rotten a nice message you have sketched from your inner feelings (Report) Reply

  • (2/28/2010 3:13:00 AM)

    No one can define pain
    i only wish happiness and sorrows we could strain
    The tough times will pass, they say
    But what if there's no hope no bright ray

    agreed with your say.. really a realistic approach..10/10
    (Report) Reply

  • Dulakshi Wakista (2/22/2010 1:34:00 AM)

    You've expressed your thoughts so nicely.well expressed.Good piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2010 1:24:00 PM)

    I like the way you are not scared of saying what you think despite the fact that many will not stand by what you are saying.That was well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (1/30/2010 3:01:00 AM)

    Euthanasia is against all the humanbeings..know some countries are not allowing these human killings.. here i want to say that ur central theme is not good but the poem framing is so wonderful.. (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2010 11:45:00 AM)

    I am against euthanasia, but the poem is well writen and it is wonderful that you have your own position.
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/26/2010 2:51:00 PM)

    The pain of pain can be so painful that it sometimes evaporates the very essence of existance. Compelling creativity in dealing with a complex subject! Qualitative questions my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/26/2010 7:38:00 AM)

    heart yet rains but by blood reeling in pain
    love for life disowns as blood lose red
    as the day rills over the black night
    dew of night accords deep by pangs of dark, most poignant write by the imagery of grueling pain persisting upon the illusion of cure, yet love of life eludes through the furrows of sorrow soul when hinges hanging over the cliff of living, wonderful write by imagery of pain, yet all through ingenuity swooning upon the beauty of grace,10+++++, thanks for sharing
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  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (12/24/2009 10:57:00 AM)

    Nice...superb..no need to say this is a good one...clap, clap! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 21, 2010

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