jodi right

Rookie (28/06/90 / Sheffield)

jodi right Poems

1. Colours Of Abandoning 7/17/2005
2. The Worst Poem Ever- By My Friend Richard Markham 12/20/2005
3. Her Extinction 1/8/2006
4. Don'T Leave 1/25/2006
5. Name Of Love 1/26/2006
6. Hunter's Punishment 1/27/2006
7. Betrayal Of Sense 4/8/2006
8. Love Lost In Lifes Gain 5/9/2006
9. A Perfect Connection 2/10/2007
10. Underneath 5/12/2008
11. Welcome To My Life 12/20/2005
12. Broken 1/17/2012
13. Socks In Love 9/5/2007
14. Lost Love 12/18/2005
15. The Past's Reflection 2/4/2009
16. You Ugly Git 2/18/2006
17. Cannot Face The Truth, Cannot Hide The Feeling 7/17/2005
18. Take Me Away 4/3/2005
19. Temptation Awaits 3/24/2005
20. Sea Quatrain 4/11/2005
21. My Sweet Little Child 4/5/2005
22. Natures Pupose 5/27/2005
23. Oh, How I'D Like To Travel 4/5/2005
24. Wondering 3/24/2005
25. Come Home With Me 4/3/2005
26. Truth 3/27/2005
27. A Plead For Rescue 4/8/2005
28. Be There 3/24/2005
29. Seven Whispers 3/24/2005
30. Desperation For Love 3/24/2005
31. Hope 3/24/2005

Comments about jodi right

  • Andrew Konisberg (5/27/2005 11:12:00 AM)

    keep at it, Jodi. you are extremely talented. I could only just about string sentences together at your are writing things that are 'up there' with some of the best poets on this site. I am only an average poet myself, but I know ability when I read it. Keep going!

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  • long gone (4/8/2005 9:46:00 AM)

    you, quite simply, are one of the most gifted writers on the entire site. I am stunned at how effortless your verse appears. and...your best is yet to come.

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  • Lamont Haywood (3/31/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    You are a sensitive and talented poet. Your work is brilliant! You are capable of writing the way most of us wish we could write and yet to be so young...It is only in age however because your heart is very mature and wise. You make me believe again.

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  • Bkhj Chen (3/31/2005 12:37:00 PM)

    you are a goddess in poetry.
    i look forward to seeing your published poetry books in the future.

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  • Emily Nunchuck (3/31/2005 12:57:00 AM)

    The first person I've read on here with an age so close to mine, as well as a talent far beyond her age. You're most definately one of the best poets of our age I've read, and it's nice to relate to poems as I do with yours.

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  • Drew Chadwick (3/30/2005 7:58:00 PM)

    You are utterly amazing and inspirational. Fantastic, deep work. Well done.

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Best Poem of jodi right

Seven Whispers

Seven Whispers pass me by.
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the mind.
The mind is imaginary, full of trickery and magical places
Which makes up fantasies of desires you wish you could posses but only have a glance of.
Seeing through the eyes of the mind you see only images you create but cannot be brought to the existence of life.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of love.
Love is peace and beauty in which your heart creates to defend the world from complete ...

Read the full of Seven Whispers

Be There

Be there

Take my body
And hold me dear for I shall fall
Take my hand
And comfort me keenly for I shall weep
Take my mouth
And kiss me passionately for I shall live again
Take my soul
And love me tenderly for I shall be cherished