jodi right

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  • Andrew Konisberg (5/27/2005 11:12:00 AM)

    keep at it, Jodi. you are extremely talented. I could only just about string sentences together at your age...you are writing things that are 'up there' with some of the best poets on this site. I am only an average poet myself, but I know ability when I read it. Keep going!

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  • long gone (4/8/2005 9:46:00 AM)

    you, quite simply, are one of the most gifted writers on the entire site. I am stunned at how effortless your verse appears. and...your best is yet to come.

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  • Lamont Haywood (3/31/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    You are a sensitive and talented poet. Your work is brilliant! You are capable of writing the way most of us wish we could write and yet to be so young...It is only in age however because your heart is very mature and wise. You make me believe again.

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  • Bkhj Chen (3/31/2005 12:37:00 PM)

    you are a goddess in poetry.
    i look forward to seeing your published poetry books in the future.

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  • Emily Nunchuck (3/31/2005 12:57:00 AM)

    The first person I've read on here with an age so close to mine, as well as a talent far beyond her age. You're most definately one of the best poets of our age I've read, and it's nice to relate to poems as I do with yours.

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  • Drew Chadwick (3/30/2005 7:58:00 PM)

    You are utterly amazing and inspirational. Fantastic, deep work. Well done.

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Best Poem of jodi right

Be There

Be there

Take my body
And hold me dear for I shall fall
Take my hand
And comfort me keenly for I shall weep
Take my mouth
And kiss me passionately for I shall live again
Take my soul
And love me tenderly for I shall be cherished

Read the full of Be There

Come Home With Me

I see you there standing alone
So lonely, so broken
Hollow inside you search
Search for a guide
To take you to unknown places
To Comfort you, to hold you close
To take you home

Your face stays emotionless