jodi right

Rookie (28/06/90 / Sheffield)

Be There - Poem by jodi right

Be there

Take my body
And hold me dear for I shall fall
Take my hand
And comfort me keenly for I shall weep
Take my mouth
And kiss me passionately for I shall live again
Take my soul
And love me tenderly for I shall be cherished


Comments about Be There by jodi right

  • Nasra Al Adawi (4/20/2005 1:18:00 AM)

    There so much passion in your poetry...its lovely (Report)Reply

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  • (4/4/2005 3:37:00 PM)

    I like this one the best of what I have seen, so far. Word choice, flow, and brevity were all effective. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/2/2005 2:17:00 AM)

    wow, i love the Rhythm of this poem, your quite the poet. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/31/2005 12:14:00 PM)

    I like this poem's repetition of beginning words. It gives the poem a crispness that conveys a lot of meaning with simple words.

    The words are very carefully chosen. This is the ideal poem to read because it is short and very poetic. I hate to read long poems. Very good poem.
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  • (3/30/2005 2:10:00 PM)

    for such a young age you have a very strong hold on words...in the words of sherrie, strong and beautiful sums this poem up perfectly...never stop writing (Report)Reply

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  • (3/28/2005 7:29:00 PM)

    i like it. its cute, yet it has a very strong voice. you like good charlotte? me too... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 24, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 30, 2005


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