jodi right

Be There

Be there

Take my body
And hold me dear for I shall fall
Take my hand
And comfort me keenly for I shall weep
Take my mouth
And kiss me passionately for I shall live again
Take my soul
And love me tenderly for I shall be cherished

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 24, 2005
Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 30, 2005

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  • Nasra Al AdawiNasra Al Adawi (4/20/2005 1:18:00 AM)

    There so much passion in your poetry...its lovely

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  • Chuck Audette (4/4/2005 3:37:00 PM)

    I like this one the best of what I have seen, so far. Word choice, flow, and brevity were all effective.

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  • Jessy Wessy (4/2/2005 2:17:00 AM)

    wow, i love the Rhythm of this poem, your quite the poet.

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  • Bkhj Chen (3/31/2005 12:14:00 PM)

    I like this poem's repetition of beginning words. It gives the poem a crispness that conveys a lot of meaning with simple words.

    The words are very carefully chosen. This is the ideal poem to read because it is short and very poetic. I hate to read long poems. Very good poem.

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  • Renee Lewis (3/30/2005 2:10:00 PM)

    for such a young age you have a very strong hold on words...in the words of sherrie, strong and beautiful sums this poem up perfectly...never stop writing

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  • Gina PrettyBrownEyes (3/28/2005 7:29:00 PM)

    i like it. its cute, yet it has a very strong voice. you like good charlotte? me too...

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