Wondering Poem by jodi right
Wondering
Over land I pass and go
Over water I sink and leave
In love I weep and despair
In life I sorrow and lose
But In mind I stay and venture
See Mind keeps me alive
For it speaks sense
And never confuses
I shall stay there and rejoice
As little voices slowly change
From hate to love
See mind keeps me from life
For life as banished me
i thought i was very good, somtimes you just want to leave life altogether and to go a place with no worries, u explained it very well! !
jodi, you take us on a journey through your writing...it's a gift...thanks for sharing
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12/6/2024 5:14:35 AM # 1.0.0
Very good, thought provoking poem. The otherwise normal words describing emotion come together to form complex imagery. I can see into this poem. very good