jodi right

Wondering

Over land I pass and go
Over water I sink and leave
In love I weep and despair
In life I sorrow and lose
But In mind I stay and venture
See Mind keeps me alive
For it speaks sense
And never confuses
I shall stay there and rejoice
As little voices slowly change
From hate to love
See mind keeps me from life
For life as banished me

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 24, 2005
Poem Edited: Saturday, May 1, 2010

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Comments about Wondering by jodi right

  • Bkhj Chen (4/7/2005 10:00:00 PM)

    Very good, thought provoking poem.
    The otherwise normal words describing emotion come together to form complex imagery. I can see into this poem.
    very good

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  • Amy Taylor (4/5/2005 12:00:00 PM)

    i thought i was very good, somtimes you just want to leave life altogether and to go a place with no worries, u explained it very well! !

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  • Renee Lewis (3/30/2005 3:35:00 PM)

    jodi, you take us on a journey through your writing...it's a gift...thanks for sharing

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