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Winter Moonlight

Rating: 4.7

The snow, so peaceful and serene,
caressed by the soft moonlight,
gave magical feelings to the night...

The soft blue glow, the lovers' words that then did flow,
their lips closer and closer until, locked in the throes
of a passionate embrace,
he decided to express his feelings, to keep her safe.

He whispered softly,
his words like music to her ears, 'I Love You, '
and her response the same,
heard like the gentle breeze,
'And I, love you, eternally.'

That was the night they promised
to be together through everything,
each to care for the other when old and gray
A lovers' pact the most likely to last.


Greenwolfe 1962 23 July 2008

This is a beautiful and romantic description of something which may or may not work out. Call me back in seven yours and we'll see who was right. The poem may just be as long as the marriage on this one. And just as memorable. GW62

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Kesav Easwaran 23 July 2008

a pact to last long...winter moon light witness...good piece 9

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Loved the romantic flow of this poem. Sweet and gentle..last stanza is beautiful! ; D

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Pamela Lutwyche 20 October 2008

This is a nice gentle poem like the lovers I’m sure they will be together until they are old and grey. You have put your poem in a very easy way to read, which is good...............10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2008

Ammmmmmzing description............10

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Anong All 27 July 2008

Ah, I like the passion I feel in your words.

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Patricia Gale 26 July 2008

A lovers' pact the most likely to last. That... says it all.... Fine work

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