Sunday, November 19, 2006

008: Love Comes In Waves

Rating: 4.6
My head is burning with her gripes
Why am I always wrong not right?


Her heart will always be with mine
To keep it so is not a crime
My thoughts and hers, as one, Entwined


We've been together all this time
Let's turn the water back to Wine
To drink together for all Time
And find that perfect love again
Our hearts, once more, again, Combined


Could we?
Should we?
Of course we Should.


So, should You try to make it right
To quench the fire and put it out
I think you should, just take the Time...

There is nothing more divine
For turning water back to Wine

Love will Always, Come in Waves
Those angry, burning heads to Save

Colin Johnston
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
Heather Wilkins 31 May 2013
excellent poem. emotions are well expressed. a fifty-fifty relationship sounds better to me.
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Ken E Hall 01 August 2010
In a moment of self pity you write mans woes believe me join the club...well done...The title....Love comes in Waves could also be 'What have I Done' Your truthful thats why she loves you.....regards
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We’ve been together all this time Let's turn the water back to Wine To drink together for all Time The desire to reclaim an earlier beautified emotional bond is exquisite. This was the first of your poems I had read, and after a few frustrating days of bothersome problems, the joy of discovering your work is bliss. So tired but so appreciative my friend.
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Kathleen West 31 March 2009
Lovely poem, and oh so true. True love that can stand the test of time and our ever changing lives, is a worth fighting to keep! Keep up the good fight! Best wishes. Kathleen
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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 August 2008
This is really a beauty. A heart poured out as poem sathya narayana
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lovely poem.. you touched my heart with this.. best regards, joan d.h.
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lila uzamkui 05 July 2008
wow i loved reading your poems goodluck, and keep up the wonderful work
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Bernard Tommy Vue 17 May 2008
I love it! perfect details, nice outline, wonderful! flawless! 10 out of 10!
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Bob Blackwell 26 April 2008
'Why am I always wrong not right' I have the same problem today, but somehow they do not matter anymore. Really liked this poem, love really does come in waves, but sometime we can be swamped by it. Great write, keep writing. Bob
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Michael K 12 April 2008
Wonderful.. Her Heart will always be with mine.. these words have special meaning.
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