(008) Poetry Poem by premji premji

(008) Poetry

Rating: 2.8


Imagine,
A lone horse
Harnessed to a chariot
For life, with free reins...
So fast he runs
Through paths un-trodden
To find right words
To fulfill your mind’s need
That I add my collection of letters
Is that called poetry?
Will you be the rider,
My beloved reader, in my chariot
And enjoy the highways of freedom with
Lot of love and care?

6/6/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009

oh yes! that is poetry... riding with the wind!

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My beloved reader, in my chariot And enjoy the highways of freedom with Lot of love and care? it is freedm chariot dirvenby me for freedom ride... comenjoin.. what a lovley oprpresentation.. good piece of poetry...10

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Pandian Angelina 22 June 2009

'Horse with free reins A charioteer who Need not look about With care and worry But look around Carefree and at leisure! ' Who will not take up Such offer of joyous ride? With the wind in the face Into untrodden virgin land The fertile ever creative Mindscape of Premji! Leena

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Sandra Fowler 24 May 2009

Stunning use of metaphor. Exceptional in every way.10/10, Premji. Always your friend, Sandra

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Estrella Baldemosa 13 February 2009

chase all the words premji, the wordsmith.

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