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[01] You Don'T Know

Rating: 5.0

I've agreed on some spaces
in my virtual hard disk
In a tired evening
Moon knows that but you don't know!

I've killed myself
during an offer on violet air
During a trust comes into bud
Cell phone knows that but you don't know!

I've surrendered yesterdays
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Rani Turton 21 August 2008

Nicely penned and poignant. 'The ribbon on a daydream' is a wonderfully poetic phrase.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 26 July 2009

Veru subtle and interesting poem. I like it. (10v.) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Brishti Mazumdar 30 June 2009

Wow...very nice....I loved it.... Will you please go thru my new posts 'A Subterranean and an island'? 'Are You Searching For The River? '

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Surayya Abbas 01 May 2009

Very nice poem. I like it. thanks

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Kesav Easwaran 19 September 2008

tender love feelings tenderly expressed...well done, Ashraf 10

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Sandra Fowler 15 September 2008

The refrain is very effective. Superb contemporary imagery. The true poet must always be willing to give himself away in words. Ten without hesitation. As always, Sandra

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