0135an Informal Note To God Poem by Michael Shepherd

0135an Informal Note To God

Rating: 2.5


In case you were on holiday, this nice sunny weather,
(and may I say, what a great idea the Sun is?)
I thought I'd dropp you a line to say, in case you missed it
that our great President, the Bush
who burns with virtue like an oil well yields,
approves that 'Intelligent Design' should be made
along with the Theory of Evolution
a cornerstone of the education of our great nation.

So just in case you felt a little reduced in function
and come back from holiday to
'Oh, were you away? We hadn't missed you...'
and your new official status, that you were simply around
(around? hmmm) to 'flick the switch'
while two something-or-others got together
to evolve a Creation with its quaint old ideas, like love,
(and by the way, your bright idea
of one, two and three, etc., was cute, too...)

I'd just like to take this opportunity to say
that in your modest role of
Intelligent Design
you certainly flicked the switch on
a pretty spectacular show - including those laws
which, understood by some quite impressive intelligences,
enabled the rather smaller, but impressive
'intelligent design' of the space-shuttle
to.. er.. 'evolve'.. and
to fly a fraction, Icarus-like,
nearer the sun...yep, some show...

So 'intelligent design' would be, like,
from those two proto-thingies that happened to
to meet across a room crowded with...emptiness? or everything? -
to whatever intelligent design might be needed
from Now, and every new 'invention' in the world
until...well... Then...

That seems something even better than Evolution
and a bit similar to Providence and
well, sort of.. eternal...? And universal too...

So if You are still enjoying your seventh day of rest
this pleasant sunny weather (somewhere
ecologically balanced, like the seaside, may I hope?) ,

thanks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 13 August 2005

Here Here! ! ! Good one Michael!

0 0 Reply
Max Reif 13 August 2005

ah, those laws! Yes, here's to the Legislator!

0 0 Reply
Aashish Ameya 13 August 2005

Relevant and candidly good.

0 0 Reply
Poetry Hound 13 August 2005

A delight to read, Shep. I imagine you could write a whole series of these.

0 0 Reply
Egal Bohen 13 August 2005

Spot on Michael Egal Bohen..

0 0 Reply

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
BEST POEMS
BEST POETS
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success