Manonton Dalan

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016gm16r How Could We Accomplish - Poem by Manonton Dalan

i passed a kid building castle
has no idea but making it higher
it looks like dome with antler
she smiles and said ' like it'
i look around i said 'better yet'
she is happy and went to work

children came to help to build
many ideas can't seem to finish
there's arguments ' that's mine'
pretty soon fight broke out; sad
they must have watch adults do
can't come to compromise; loco

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 3, 2010

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