Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 86 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

[02] One Byte Pseudo-Friendship - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

One bit deep desire sails in the sky as a hawk
One bit feeling shooting in the blood cell
One bit dream painting leaves on canvas
One bit trust blooms on the air like perfume.

One bit sorrow cries with the sparrow
While another bit smiles with soft rain
One bit hate is more than bitter gourd
While another bit love swims lucid.

Eight bits compose one byte aroma-
The cool fragrance of pseudo-friendship!



Poem 13
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8


Comments about [02] One Byte Pseudo-Friendship by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • (10/9/2008 10:08:00 AM)


    Friendship a much abused concept well said, yet I feel the use of one bit over stated and reptitious
    alas
    'candid as candid
    can be
    will bring me
    many an enemy'
    Shimon
    the remarks were meant to be constructive and stated in friendship
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  • (9/22/2008 3:12:00 AM)



    One Byte Pseudo-friendship
    ..............................................

    The cool fragrance of pseudo-friendship!
    ................................................................
    Your sight is exact and accurate... But, It is illness of a site... Good poems... Thanks for the comment, Ashraful!
    10...............
    Tsira
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  • (9/21/2008 2:25:00 PM)


    I like the combination of original and analytical approach to the world of emotions. Your way is quite interesting as usual and I like to read your poems. Imressive closing lines! Best regards, one a (Report) Reply

  • (9/13/2008 1:56:00 AM)


    Very smart written with every bit and byte

    take care
    roger
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 4, 2012


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