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[02] Only Love

Rating: 5.0

Who yarns in the morn on a tub
Smiles on the road under a litchi tree
Shies to open eyelids if sun stops beaming
Hesitates to move keeping zero pase?

Who feels the wave of blood circulation
Trusts a dranker talking incoherent
Dreams to walk with grasshopper
Drinks a can of grief under a kadam tree?

Who comes into flower on the air-
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Shimon Weinroth 06 October 2008

love and compassion, empathy and sympathy interfused with metaphors enchanting

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Nice treat. But a bit abstract to me. Regards dr. sakti 14.08.09.

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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

''Who comes into flower on the air- with unalike petals without calyx? '' very true, only purity of love...can save...10++

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Ramesh T A 07 June 2009

Sign of a romantic lover is well expressed!

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Tsira Goge 29 May 2009

Very beautiful poem, and this does sound nicely... 10..../ Thank you for yours pleasant comments, shraful./ Best wishes, Tsira

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There's also a feeling of dispersion, disintegration described in a very good style.

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