Manonton Dalan

Gold Star - 31,753 Points (virginia, usa)

042810j Too Much To See Before Sunset - Poem by Manonton Dalan

i can see dark worshippers gathering
in couples, strolling the length of shore
i could hear giggles mixing with waves
that bubbly looks sweeping sweet sand
inviting to my tickly toes craving quick bath
i would pretty much oblige for short duration

smell of the sea is so different at dusk
but anyway it does have refreshing effect
high salty humidity clears your nose
there is a group kids building a bonfire
some are playing volleyball, some singing
i watch romantic couples; easing their fire


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 28, 2010



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