(050) Fate Poem by premji premji

(050) Fate

Rating: 3.4


Fate plays everywhere,
in love too!
You believed the great lies
that I told, with great ease...
And the simple truths:
You laughed at!

Dear,
afraid to show my heart,
You might find it:
a red rose about to wither!
The hardest of all truths:
the silliest of all jokes!
Nothing but fate!

Love: a wound!
A spearhead pierced
my heart while floating
over a dream!

(Someone yet to die
for a wound picked up a dream.)


10.07.98

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 24 August 2008

that couldn't be a water dream! lines cleverly expressive...good write 10

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C T Heart 28 August 2008

a dearly nice piece about fate and love, how it plays and wound the heart...thanks.

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Shalini Kts 04 September 2008

fate some times plays hard and hurts but in this poem fate has made you write well

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Lynda Robson 05 September 2008

Fate led me to your peom and I'm pleased beacause it is worthy of 10, Lynda xx

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Pandian Angelina 29 May 2009

True, Prem, very true Only those hit by Thunderbolt Know the electifying feeling The shivering sensation But, will they tell! Fate, cruel like a step mother Hates the victory of Love! Leaving us scarred for life Bleeding by the wayside of Life Forever waiting for a single Side long glance from Love Who is wisked away from us By mean, jealous Fate! Angel

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Sandhya S N 10 March 2009

Fate! ! ! ? ? ? I am of the opinion that we shall not blame fate for all It is we who stood behold and silent on some others decisons, but not the fate Is it not? ? ? ? sandhya

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 27 February 2009

Nice write good subject to write about.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 December 2008

Fate, Fate, Fate, the freewill' s mate. from small to great all are under it's threat. Good Work

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Anjali Sinha 23 October 2008

yes fate love and destiny all intertwined nice poem ++10 love anju

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